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vena cava
Amaranta

hands-in the instrument
 1
keeping it sterile
 2
to sink deep
 3
a larger opening;
 4
a slope further
 5
will toss muscles
 6
in soft meat
 7
oozing tender,
 8
its juices
 9
enough to regurgitate
 10
a bulimic gut;
 11
ischemic time limits
 12
before it pumps faint
 13
on that side, a little left;
 14
before it's cold
 15
on the chambers
 16

26 Dec 13

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urghy - yech!

macabre

thx for the read,
 — PollyReg

thank you, Pollyreg.
 — Amaranta

this poem has been left in the fridge too long.
 — DeformedLion

Some delish for the thought are to be left frozen. Thanks!
 — Amaranta

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