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under the sun

i'm losing chapters
to my hero's sink
tracking seven more seas
paints eccentric
gritting blue romance-
pirates; a sailor's heart
bookmarking a page
of jaded travels
my most unwritten

5 Jan 14

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too bad the word 'empty' couldn't be on L9. that would be perfect. hee hee.
i love this!
 — mandolyn

like the sea. Guess that works.
 — jenakajoffer

one for mandolyn :)

one for jenakajoffer :)
 — Amaranta

One what?
 — jenakajoffer

smile. for you, jenaka,

 — Amaranta

Well since we're all sharing, here's one for you too, beg love girl :)

I read that
But I didn't want to. The title was a pain.
 — jenakajoffer

an honor that would be. wow, a poem for me from jenaka.

 — Amaranta