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love's noun
catch-22

becoming, my love
 1
knows how -
 2
 
 
trancends when
 3
its most quiet
 4
is abstraction;
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graceful stance
 6
moves aground
 7
as matched
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by heart,
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urges still
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be longing
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11 Jan 14

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your language is a ♥
 — mandolyn

oh to be a romantic. bleeehhhhhhh.
love is much better when its raw and hot and dangerous.
if i wanted melted marshmallows id make some.
 — unknown

sorry, unknown. what is your problem?
 — unknown

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