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Ever love someone that all you can say is shit?
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because you know before you even start that they wont love you, no matter what you say or do.
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You can't play tricks, dupe them into loving
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or even liking you or even pretending to care about you.
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shit.
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love is constipated and unevaluated
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21 Mar 14


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hey, fractalcore! u post as unknown
 — unknown

you run out tricks, frac?
 — unknown

the fact you think lines 3 and 4 are a plausible scenario to manipulate a woman/man in some situations is exactly the reason why this/these particular someone/s won't ever love you.

it's not a game, nor a board to mark your scores on. it's not a gamble where you hope if you get all the right pieces in the right places ... you'll  get some true human emotional response.

there's only one actual truth or answer ... and it's a cliche ... be yourself.
then if this 'whoever' likes what they see, you might actually get the chance to develop it into a real human, adult, emotional relationship.

once you get that, you might pass the stool of your lack of understanding.
 — jenn

love, if you're considering it as an externalised force or energy with a type of consciousness, doesn't judge or make selective choices ... like anything, it wants to thrive in an environment which it can best extended and reproduce itself.
 — jenn

... and if you feel like a romantic, poetic victim, a thrall at the whim of love's fickle finger... then, you probably are :)
 — jenn

i'm not so new in pc but im  new to jenn being fractalcore?
 — unknown

this isn't one of mine. i don't play tricks.

tricks are for kids, silly rabbit :)
 — jenn

frac's a kid. can't make up his mind
 — unknown

it's not a game, nor a board to mark your scores on. it's not a gamble where you hope if you get all the right pieces in the right places ... you'll  get some true human emotional response.

there's only one actual truth or answer ... and it's a cliche ... be yourself.
then if this 'whoever' likes what they see, you might actually get the chance to develop it into a real human, adult, emotional relationship.

once you get that, you might pass the stool of your lack of understanding.
— jenn          [ !]

love, if you're considering it as an externalised force or energy with a type of consciousness, doesn't judge or make selective choices ... like anything, it wants to thrive in an environment which it can best extended and reproduce itself.
— jenn          [ !]

... and if you feel like a romantic, poetic victim, a thrall at the whim of love's fickle finger... then, you probably are :)"
— jenn        

i knew it all along jenn, i just didn't believe it at the time! this is real wisdom and i am sorry i never appreciated it fully at the time! (hope you see this)
 — mr_e

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