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fractalcore

           {lin[E}arly],
 1
       wont-direction'null:
 2
    dis'position   dis'placing
 3
   the 'now'          tow'words
 4
duh back,              bending ol'
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tangency                w/ urgency
 6
@d speed                of de'light
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& finding &               keeping
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eureka mow             meant
 9
to graze none           other
 10
than the bestest         grr
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rasp of reality, of        d'
 12
one that holds and
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keeps the burrrning
 14
inn repeat mode 2D
 15
power off... err 3D
 16
power on ♥ no, d'
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paw'er of arf n'
 18
kitty...
 19
 
 
4D black swan of timelessness: still,
 20
creating ripples of surprise... ruffles her
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own feathers ones every rand-day-voodoo
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@d blah moon junk-shun of per'pet'dual notion
 23
calming and goofing redundantly as of late
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as always since time in memoriam: this
 25
and that forms of all schisms that be.
 26




#blackswan
#mindstuffandheartspeelings


for you
with all the love
i can muster
as always

      ____
     __/__
       /\
     /   \
fractalcore
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
-----{@

13 May 14

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Comments:

digging the swan song
 — JKWeb

good 'ol frac! :)
 — mandolyn

brilliant this with d'lihgt and devilishness
 — AlchemiA

this poem is so visual it makes me want to dabble in oils or other such dubious substances

Larry felt tips Lark
 — larrylark

thanks, JKWebster sir.
good to hear from you again.

yes, rubber mandee, it's the good ol' me, hehe...

namaste, Alc.

thank you, Larry on visuals-altering substance Lark.

;)
 — fractalcore

10 always.
 — unknown

thunks, unk.
:)
 — fractalcore

Truly the alignment master; I nod to you.
 — Cerulise

thank you, Cerulise.
:)
 — fractalcore

Are fractalcore and AlchemiA related?
 — unknown

no, unk, but we're good friends.
thanks for stopping

bye.
;)
 — fractalcore

Wow cool! Smiley face :)
 — sylvia

thanks, sylvia.
:)
 — fractalcore

yowza!
 — Modiva

makes me smile
 — unknown

thank you, ever-one...

:)
 — fractalcore

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