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Friends; Some I Didn't Know
Simpa23

The audience awaited with bated breath for the show to commence,
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You could’ve heard a pin drop once the soundtrack faded to silence.
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A single click echoed, from the rafters a solitary spotlight shone,
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There I stood in front of a sold out crowd….. act one scene one.
 4
 
 
I cleared my throat and composed myself for I had a story to tell,
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No prologue needed, the theatre travelled with me when I visited hell.
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A few days after we saw in the new millennium, our journey began.
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In the blink of an eye, a naïve young boy grew into a brave young man,
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As I retell my story of how tragedy stuck, of how I was forced to grow,
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Silhouettes listen from the seats furthest back, the friends I didn't know.
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I've regularly occupied their thoughts, they felt my pain when I bled,
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Faceless angels who prayed for my well-being when the disease spread.  
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Slightly in front of the anonymous sit those whose role had been miscast,
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Residing in distant memories live the faded faces from my past.
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It'd been years since I had seen them, maybe decades since I'd spoken to,
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Their hearts still skipped a beat upon hearing what I was going through.
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As I lay my eyes on who occupies the next few rows, I smile and reminisce,
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Delighted to see the grown-up faces of the kids I went to school with.
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Remembering the good old days, my childhood flashed before my eyes,
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Until I hear the haunting sound of a once happy classroom start to cry.
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As I recite the darkest chapters of my life from my harrowing perspective,
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The eyes of the audience start to fill, tears stream as they begin to relive.
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Memories comes flooding back, the good, the bad, the happy, the sad,
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We temporarily revisit the past, staying there too long would only drive us mad.
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An intermission breaks up my story, a brief pause for fifteen minutes or so,
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Back to reality momentarily before continuing on with my one man show.
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Picking up where I left off, I see the friendly faces from the village I call home,
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Ours is a caring and close-knit community, not once have i ever felt alone.
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My various social circles all overlap and merge as they sit side by side,
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A beautiful scene of diverse friendships united, too many tears they've cried.
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With them, the parents and siblings of my mates whom I see on a regular basis,
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Standing in front of them all I feel like a local celebrity, I almost feel famous.
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Nearer the stage, a row of inspirational people sit looking up at me,
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Hospital buddies, they're a specially extended branch of my family tree.
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We're a family of friends, bound not by blood but by something beyond,
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It’s our experiences which are relative to the strength of our bond.
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Filling the front row, I smile proudly as I see my best friends and family,
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The most important people in my life, these people mean the world to me.
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They chose to walk along side me on this journey, in it for the long haul,
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I truly understand the value of family and friendship, I cherish them all.
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So supportive, the pillars of strength that kept me positive and strong,
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The reasons why giving up wasn't an option, they kept me fighting on.
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My nearest and dearest, they picked me up when I was at my lowest,
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Those closest to my heart, right by my side when i got my diagnosis.
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My dreams seemed impossible, I found nightmares on scans and x-rays,
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Dark clouds made tomorrow barely visible, but I'm here to see you all today.
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I had a happy ending, it was worth the three hours you have listened,
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To hear me declare with the widest grin "I'm over ten years in remission!"  
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No epilogue needed, my statement was the perfect full stop for my story,
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I'm scarred and I'm disabled but I stand in front of you, in all my glory.
 50
Lights shone down on the auditorium, I couldn't see a single empty seat,
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My performance ends, and as one the entire audience rose to their feet.
 52
 
 
Sharing my night with you all has been amazing, every minute I've adored,
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With a tear in my eye, I start clapping, each and every one of you I applaud.
 54
As my applause continues, so elegantly the men bow whilst the women curtsey,
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Before the curtain falls I take a photo, I always want to carry this image with me.
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18 May 14


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