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Sestina for a Monday Night
spaye08

My eyes are heavy, my brain is full.
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Books have been read, letters unfold.
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A sunburn warms my chest.
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Friends were good to me today,
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feeding me, showing me new things.
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I want to sleep, but I don’t want to say goodbye,
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because only valiant soldiers announce goodbye.
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The light of the hour is fading but full.
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A pillow, a blanket, a candle, are my surrounding things.
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It’s time for dreams to unfold.
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Yet I’ve never known such a haze like today.
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The mattress covered in sheets presses against my chest.
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Clutter around my dresser and chest
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remind me it’s almost time to tell Glendale goodbye.
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I move only five days from today.
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There dwells in me a peaceful feeling that my time here was full.
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May I look forward to watch days in Azusa unfold.
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There are too many materials in my world I call “things.”
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He and I were talking on the phone about things.
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I wonder if someday he’ll give me butterflies in my chest.
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We just have to wait and see how the story will unfold.
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He’s my friend. To that I certainly won’t say goodbye.
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When we talk my life is full,
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brimming like the basket of strawberries I saw today.
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I can hardly stay awake the last half hour of today.
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Is it worth writing these things?
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All of my words seem so sluggish and full,
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my lungs are breathing slower inside of my chest.
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I’m still waiting for the soldier in me to announce her goodbye.
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The events of tomorrow loiter in the future to unfold.
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And slowly, as my fingertips type this story it will unfold
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the timeline of today
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and my reluctance to say goodbye.
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So foolish these things,
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signals my mind to the heart in my chest.
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Remember, little one, what’s full is full.
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Goodbye, Monday things. Thank you for
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letting me see you unfold today.
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There’s a hope in my chest, that tomorrow will be just as full.
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2 Jun 14

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