poetry critical

online poetry workshop



may 20 2014: jail
dvdsxr

More words.
 1
Listless; hopeful.
 2
I crave poetry,
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passion and laughter.
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I crave (whispers)
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in my ear.
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On my ear?
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(both) would be nice?
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Make sense.
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Starting now.
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wait. Cryptic.
 11
Enigma. Mystery.
 12
Riddles & Puzzles.
 13
Prose &
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broken sentences.
 15
All days weigh
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on the motion
 17
of the clock. No?
 18
The hands creeping
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circles over & over.
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69 68 67 66
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by the time you
 22
read this;
 23
a countdown in letters.
 24
Having fun yet?
 25
No. One. can take that from you.
 26
I brood,
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simmer & stew
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I want summer love
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(just for the summer)
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in one ear and out t'other.
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(I wager)
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We're all hopeful,
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dear.
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Comma.
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Reality
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is a deer in the headlights:
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just run it over already.
 38
Oh well
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it's not like
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I appeal
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to superstition,
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ignorance,
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"gut feelings"
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-personal experience-
 45
fear, faith, fundamentalism.
 46
Let's face THAT reality:
 47
Science might be sexy,
 48
but simple takes the cake
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e'ry time.
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Another way to put it:
 51
I ponder
 52
I think
 53
I tinker
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I saunter...
 55
That is
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I stroll...
 57
The brain works best
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when you walk:
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SCIENCE.
 60
SHOWS.
 61
but who needs science
 62
when
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you
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have
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MUSCLE?
 66
What was I saying?
 67
Am I even here?
 68
Philosophy
 69
I am
 70
...whatever.
 71
for poetry, passion, & laughter.
 72
I am listless. Hopeful.
 73
Writing pointless words.
 74
Poetry:
 75
Music
 76
made
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speech.
 78
For the lack of rhymes:
 79
I apologize.
 80
For all the
 81
times
 82
I made no lullabies,
 83
well. Shit.
 84
I hope this
 85
bit
 86
will make up for ...it.
 87
Nonsense.
 88
This is
 89
the worst
 90
end to
 91
a poem
 92
ever.
 93
Just so abrupt
 94
and
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29 Jul 14


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