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Time Flies
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Sooner or later
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middle life, middle age
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for better or for worse
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face reality
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state of mind
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utter hindsight
 6
golden years
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ups and downs
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inevitable decline
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biological deterioration
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Freudian melancholy
 11
bifocals and impotence
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anxiety and hearing loss
 13
gray hairs and wrinkles and folds
 14
sunspots and dystrophy
 15
(but) not losing it
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just not (using) it
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the brain strokes
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the heart aches
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so diet run jump
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stretch diet run
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doctor drugs diet
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(growing old gracefully)
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fighting ageism
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embracing the twilight
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youth is in the mind
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the mind has dementia
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senility and Alzheimers
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reflexes sluggish
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stamina drains
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physical weakness
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persistent disability
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old bones break,
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all things in moderation,
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senior citizens
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can still sing
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socialize and act silly
 37
sexually active libido'd
 38
the vintage years
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hide and seek
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with diabetes, heart disease,
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cancer and euthanasia,
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in America it's
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expensive health care
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social security and medicare
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loss, love, thinning hair
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we all get there.
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7 Aug 14

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the decline of health with age is apparent. this does well in showing that, rather than telling. good pacing and use of language. reminds me of "fitter happier" by radiohead
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