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Losses and Losers
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Toe curled, silently I stood as I heard her heavy words…
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“My daddy”.
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They say voice is the first thing you forget,
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then facial features in your mind’s eye,
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the sounds of the footsteps.
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Tears fell like Niagara.
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Couldn’t see you in hospice,
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buckets of tears would pour from my lids, I didn’t want to upset you further
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as if you didn’t know that this was twilight.
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You never saw me be no coward.
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50th wedding anniversary, ‘The event’ of the century, your century.
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I wasn’t there, never showed,
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drunk in my rented corner, wallowing in my loss; irony.
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There will never be an apology; earth and wind you are now, swirling distantly.
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You never got to see me sober.
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I beg for signs that never come.
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In those moments, its real and surreal, your really gone.
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I talk to you and there is no reply.
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Silence surrounds the echo of my questions.
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You never got to see me making my dreams.
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So few things I do know; aerospace engineer, colonel father, unknown real father,
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you were successful, sophisticated, mean and kind, depending on the answerer.
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I took it all for granted, and I walked past.
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Pictures litter the walls you built, hollow, a moment locked in time.
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Time will turn those moments into dust too, at some point, as the rest of us.
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You will never be in any more of my pictures.
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No memorial, funeral, ceremony.
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A stranger spread you somewhere.
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“The sun will raise tomorrow.” your mantra in distress.
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I don’t know the day that became untrue for you.
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You ceased cold and alone, blue toed.
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We all turned out the lights, curled up warm that night.
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Your light never turned back on.
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You will never see myself potentiated.
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6 Sep 14


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