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The Anniversary
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This is a true story.

She was born: clinging, wrinkled, kicking and screaming;
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wailing at the bright lights and sterile, latex hands.
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Her first breath was of recycled hospital air,
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her infant lungs starting the marathon of life. It was her first cry for attention.
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She squirmed, wiggled and grew, aged, ripened.
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For a while, if she asked, it was given. She learned to need,
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she learned to take, and she learned to want.
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And like most people, she wanted what she couldn’t have.
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It wasn’t a thing you could hold or touch or feel.
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It wasn’t even actually a thing, but she didn’t know this.
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She never learned that you can’t taste or smell an idea.
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She wanted the world.
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She wanted all the world and all its love on a plate
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cut into dainty, perfect pieces that she could chew and spit and swallow.
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She would look Hunger in it’s awful eyes
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and lick her lips because she knew
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that someone was providing for her.
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She was told that she could have anything she wanted while she grew up.
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She didn’t have to worry about day to day sadness or anxiety or jealousy.
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No one thought to take the time to teach her to cope.
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No one taught her to be healthy.
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Love and health and wealth would just appear
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and pave a path to the bank and the cradle.
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The world would be hers.
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If only she could be free of the tyranny of mother-daughter bondage
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that gave her everything except what she wanted.
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She knew she could have children and love and money
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and be an adult with the extra-long, sexy, extra-light cigarettes.
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She could grow up faster than the rest,
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because she knew she was smarter than the rest.
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She could do anything with her hands- pencil, paint, hair, and nails.
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She would provide and she would thrive; as long as she got away.
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So she married and she babied.
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She married and she babied
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and she married
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and she babied.
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This was not the world.
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Years became needy, greedy children
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and debts became necessary, bitter divorces.
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Put enough miles between one mortgage and another
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and you don’t have to think about the latter.
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A new husband, a new state, a new job, a new life.
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She could start over. It was okay, normal, expected.
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No one told her life was easy, but clearly,
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she knew it was only a matter of time and patience
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and maybe, just maybe, a teeny, weeny bit of effort.
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Though It wouldn’t be a problem because she knew she was smart.
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She could memorize a thousand different words
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and recite them front and backwards and in the middle.
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That was her gift. Rote learning and memorization.
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Repeating and repeating and parroting.
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She wanted the world and all it’s magic material.
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She knew she wanted a beautiful bed to sleep in, and a wardrobe that was modern.
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Though she had already lost her credit
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through a decade of sectional couches,
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door to door vacuums, brand new houses,
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breast implants, and laser eye surgery
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back surgery and wrist surgery
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ear surgery, hand surgery, foot surgery.
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Then came the pills.
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The pills and the books and the movies
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and the bras and the shoes and the purses.
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They came on credit. The children’s credit.
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She had all those social security numbers memorized and then some.
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She used everyone’s names and numbers,
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and tax returns and credit cards.
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She made cocktails and she took them so she could relax.
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A healthy dose of Valium, Ambien, Lorazepam,
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Diazepam, Clonazepam, Alprazolam,
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Xanax, Codeine, Ativan, Morphine.
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So she could forget on command and sleep on demand.
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She wanted what she couldn’t have.
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What she couldn’t buy or steal or forge.
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It was a lesson that she never learned:
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Happiness isn’t husbands or houses.
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Happiness isn’t marriage and money.
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She never learned the secret is happiness you have to work for.
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So all the pills and the dollars and the credit she stole, took, borrowed… did nothing.
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She was always hungry, never satisfied.
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She never memorized how
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being an emotionally healthy adult was the key to happiness.
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She just took and lied
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and hoped against hope
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that nobody would find out.
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But they kept finding out.
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She kept getting caught,
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hand in the cookie jar,
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punished once, punished twice,
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a face of denial always spewing words of embarrassment
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and calculated misinformation, lies telling lies.
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She told all of us she was on track
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with a perfect grade point average,
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the top of her class,
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memorizing ever memorizing
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lessons, words, numbers, and instructions.
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She was making something of herself.
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She said that she was going to start over
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and finally be where she should have been all those years ago.
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She said it was the drugs fault.
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The diseases and the drugs and the addictions.
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She never said it was her choice
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whether misguided or ignorant or manically sociopathic criminal whims.
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She didn’t understand that she was still responsible for herself indefinitely.
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She never did. She thought someone else would make it work, make it better, make it okay.
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She didn’t understand how marriage or children or drugs or money or clothes couldn’t save her.
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But she understood that she could make it all go away.
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She knew she could make everything easy breezy.
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She knew that if she were to lie down
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in the backseat of the idling car she couldn’t afford,
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boxed in the garage of the house she hated,
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she would only have to wait a little while longer.
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She knew that if she crushed enough pills
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and drank enough mixtures of enough narcotics
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that she wouldn’t even have to wait.
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She would just fall asleep and it would be as if no time passed at all.
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She didn’t take into account that time would continue to pass even when she was finished.
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She didn’t know that the engine of an idling car
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would get so hot that even the parts in the floor of the backseat
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would burn into her cool, pale flesh.
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She didn’t think that maybe the indifferent carbon monoxides
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would leak their itsy bitsy selves into all the other atmospheres
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and furthest corners of the house
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where the dogs were instinctively retreating, choking.
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She didn’t realize that townhouses are really all one building,
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even if they have different addresses.
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She didn’t pause to ponder that the exhaust
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could move from garage to house to neighbor.
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She didn’t stop to consider the fragile lungs
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of all the other animals around her- children, dogs, people, pets.
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She didn’t think of anyone but herself;
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how she was at the bottom of it all.
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She only thought of how life had always teased;
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held in front of her a mystery to lust for.
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She thought how she didn’t even know what life was;
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how she only ever hurt people
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and stole from them and how those very people would lock her away,
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and what they must think of her.
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She thought of all the sadness and anxiety and misery
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that she didn’t need to when she was younger.
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Now she didn’t have room for anything else
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and it filled all of her lonely thoughts in the end.
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She thought of only one person;
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herself, a needy greedy child with no one to teach her.
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She thought as she laid back:
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Everything will be alright.
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11 Sep 14


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