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Four Seasons Of Cancer
Simpa23

------------------Autumn-------------------
 1
 
 
Fireworks light up such splendid scenery,
 2
Flamed confetti covers the tree.
 3
Falling, landing, setting his branches ablaze,
 4
Burning leaves emblazon Autumn days.
 5
 
 
Flaming and fluorescent, but colours fade fast,
 6
The party ends, the good times don’t last.
 7
Burnt oranges darken, yellows turn brown,
 8
Reds rust,  he's wearing a dying gown.
 9
 
 
-----------My Autumn-----------
 10
In pain and standing crooked,
 11
My knee’s aching and inflamed.
 12
That word scares me to death,
 13
How many lives has cancer claimed.
 14
 
 
--------------------Winter-------------------
 15
 
 
No thick golden coat, he misses the autumn,
 16
His leaves have wilted, died and fallen.
 17
Winter is torture, he’s naked and frozen,
 18
Scrawny branches battered and broken.
 19
 
 
Skeletal and shivering, weathered and cold,
 20
The biting wind has taken it’s toll.
 21
Brutally beaten, feeling fragile and frail,
 22
Assaulted by the crisp artic gale.
 23
 
 
-----------My Winter-----------
 24
Strewn upon my pillow,
 25
Hairs from my balding head.
 26
Time for me to hibernate,
 27
Within my hospital bed.
 28
 
 
--------------------Spring-------------------
 29
 
 
Lifeless and pale, leafless and peaceful,
 30
A wintry canvas on an easel.
 31
Coming to life with every brush stroke taken,
 32
Sleeping colours slowly awaken.
 33
 
 
The spring sun rises, chasing away the cold,
 34
Leaves return, buds open, petals unfold.
 35
Blossoming so beautifully, flowery bouquets,
 36
He looks healthier with each passing day.
 37
 
 
--------------My Spring--------------
 38
On the road to recovery,
 39
No longer feeling weak.
 40
My frosted skin has thawed,
 41
The colours returned to my cheeks.
 42
 
 
--------------------Summer-------------------
 43
 
 
He’s taller, he’s stronger, he’s back to his best,
 44
Recovered, colourful, picturesque.
 45
Bronzed branches, emerald leaves, bright blue skies,
 46
Such orgasmic pleasure for the eyes.
 47
 
 
The Summer celebrations start up once more,
 48
Sunny days seem hotter than before.
 49
Enjoying the party whilst the good times last,
 50
Growing old, watching the seasons pass.
 51
 
 
-------------My Summer-------------
 52
My dreams can come to life now,
 53
Six months ago they were dead.
 54
My shadow hides behind me,
 55
The sun shines up ahead
 56

15 Sep 14

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Comments:

Your poems lovely and original.

I really enjoyed the positive ending.

Thanks for posting.
 — unknown

Thank you.

I thought it was a creative way to describe the stages of health whilst going through treatment.
 — Simpa23

It is a creative way of describing an experience I have never, and hope to never, know.

There's a unique but also shared experience about this. you from colours and shapes and objects into the passage of time through it all ... and then add that personal touch.

I enjoyed you writing about something so tremendously harrowing and yet so beautifully written.
 — jenn

you from = You form *
 — jenn

Thank you for the comment.

I'm currently trying to write a few poems based on my cancer experiences, so i'm looking to make them as creative, and as different as possible.
 — Simpa23

I think you should .. there's the already well trod and explored, but no less valuable, story telling aspect of having Cancer .. but a desire to create it into written art is something I've not really experienced.

Go for it ;)
 — jenn

I've already written 3 that i have on this site;
* Friends; Some I Didn't Know
* First Days
* The Devil Spoke To Me

I try to put a different spin onto the cancer side of it, focusing on the positives of surviving rather than the illness and all the hard times. The hard times will obviously get mentioned but it's the positivity that is the biggest focus.
 — Simpa23

I will give them a read too, Simpa :)
 — jenn

This is exquisite in its pain, hope, despair and victory, the comparison to a tree lose its leaves (hair) and be reborn to full health is wonderful.  If this is your reality, you captured it perfectly.  If it is not, may you remain cancer free always.
 — Isabelle5

It was my reality when i was younger, currently just over 11 years in remission. I don't want these cancer poems to be all doom and gloom, i'd rather find a creative/visual way of telling them.
 — Simpa23

Well, you certainly achieved your goal here.  I applaud you for the way you'd handled this situation.
 — Isabelle5

Thank you.
 — Simpa23

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