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Before, now, and ever after
kripto

Purgatory
 1
An eternal moment in time
 2
doing nothing
 3
waiting
 4
hoping
 5
 
 
Life
 6
A short lived moment
 7
doing nothing
 8
waiting, with laptop on lap
 9
sitting at a Starbucks
 10
Sipping thinking, speechless and motionless
 11
 
 
Heaven
 12
Eternal, no moment
 13
Happiness, no waiting
 14
Love, no absence
 15
a Myth, an imagination
 16
 
 
Hell
 17
Infinite, no end
 18
born and/or created
 19
induced by temptation
 20
or human will
 21
reigned supreme
 22
 
 
Death
 23
Final and absolute
 24
One moment, gone, never returning
 25
hope or despair
 26
 
 
Time
 27
finite, ending with us
 28
created by us, recorded by us
 29
Time, our slave, waiting to die
 30

16 Sep 14


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This has really cheered me up.

Larry smile though your heart is breaking Lark.
 — larrylark

You are welcome.
 — kripto

lose "of hope" in |16?
|26 used the word "hope " perfectly.
good read..thanx
 — unknown

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