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riding my illusions at the expense of photons
fractalcore

  did i was where you were hid
 1
    taken, the lead, the lid off
 2
       the grid for the greed
 3
           agreed, in deed
 4
               disavowed
 5
                  wowed
 6
                    owe
 7
                    dear
 8
                 me, hue
 9
              out of theee
 10
         blew, oxxxygenetic
 11
    think tanks sphinx spanks
 12
through speakers spied er boo
 13
    duh bliss shoo dove been
 14
         indifferent current
 15
            old-knew, did
 16
                you, aye
 17
                    too
 18
                      i
 19
 
 
       do miss the euphoria
 20
        double-slit fur, yeah
 21
       yo, gas leak, tube lick
 22
            om, aum, ohm
 23
             nom, gnome
 24
              know hymn
 25
              he, so wee
 26
 
 
      in the black wholesum
 27




                   aka
     polar bare on swan lake
     (c) fractalcore 10.28.14


      this is me trying to get
            back on track...
  and the road to reality is so
       quantoom boompfhy.

                    :)

28 Oct 14

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I like the hourglass 19 lines.
^klassic fractalcore^
        =nice=
 — JKWeb

polar bare ass the lake?
 — unknown

love this
 — dvdsxr

quite a revelation: he so wows. reality bit.
 — unknown

first line is a giveaway, really. gosh! this is great work, fractalcore.
being who you are is the way to go.
 — unknown

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