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Winter is a short walk away
kripto

bitter, crisp chilled air
 1
visible breath
 2
Winters kiss approaching
 3
bringing a freezing death
 4
 
 
Naked bare trees
 5
dried leaves
 6
fallen and falling
 7
ground bound
 8
 
 
All people bundled
 9
layers upon layers
 10
gathering, huddled
 11
together
 12
 
 
behind four walls
 13
all technologically sound
 14
comfortable, naked
 15
while hot air blows
 16
 
 
the outside though
 17
still bitter and lonely
 18
and empty, no company
 19
the outlining area, scarce
 20
 
 
And as far as I can see
 21
I can not
 22
there is nothing
 23
but lit houses
 24
 
 
little oasis'
 25
shelters from the bitter cold
 26
the lonely wasteland
 27
a defense from low temperatures
 28
 
 
but yet some are not protected
 29
Little kids effected
 30
winter seeps in through
 31
making it past affordable windows
 32
 
 
so it is not a priority
 33
insuring comfort ability for all
 34
instead many fall short
 35
to defend against the winter
 36
left unprepared for the snow
 37

24 Nov 14


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