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Lover Boy
kripto

Lover boy
 1
emotional incompetence
 2
isolated amor
 3
Behind the curtains
 4
 
 
hidden and shrouded as he wants it to be
 5
forgotten or never known
 6
as he smokes his last
 7
cigarette
 8
 
 
As the rains pours down
 9
over his head
 10
Like Niagara falling, roaring upon him
 11
sheltered by the awning  
 12
 
 
He contemplates
 13
all he has ever thought
 14
and all he is yet to think
 15
as time continues
 16
 
 
I told him
 17
let go, let it all fall
 18
wash away, to be lost in the storm
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funneled into the crowded drain
 20
 
 
And run
 21
out of the secluded shelter
 22
naked into the rain
 23
ignoring the shame of society
 24
And the internal pain
 25
 
 
Only then can he ever know
 26
How much it is really worth
 27
as he spectates the brutality of earth
 28
And the miracle of nature
 29
 
 
After further contemplation
 30
He ran
 31
So fast
 32
seconds after he was lost to my vision
 33
And a grin appeared on my face
 34

6 Jan 15

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