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Love, Loss and Fingertips of Frozen Joy
Isabelle5

This is the first sunset after we buried you
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and I am not ready to leave
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this lovely place.
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You chose me and your father,
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made us wait nine months
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and then you stayed just long enough
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to turn a breathtaking shade of blue.
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Was that enough karmic connection
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or did you change your mind,
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bored already of lessons you came to learn?
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You grew pale and cold in my arms,
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a frozen sculpture of a newborn,
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despite warm gowns and
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handmade blankets woven
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with such hope.
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What did you hope,
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waiting in your spirit form
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for this life to begin?
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The sun has gone down.
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Hands are reaching out to me,
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making me stand, leading me away.
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How can I go, knowing this is
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the biggest day of your life,
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the biggest day of mine?
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Written for the women I know who have lost their babies, whether at birth or shortly after.  Too many...

4 Feb 15

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Moving poem
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