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reading a most cutting poem ever
Amaranta

a stab to ride
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in words that promise
 2
words of surrender
 3
as if air invades
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exhales, 'come again'
 5
your lung-sensitized
 6
 
 
illusion-spawn
 7
too cruel
 8
as truth; is,
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at stake, at the expense -
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run-on atoms expanse
 11
fathering photons
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15 Mar 15

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