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fractalcore
unknown

nth-fold breath
 1
at reverse
 2
affixes, hallucinating
 3
screen talking beds
 4
 
 
inside silences; hammers
 5
imprisonment warrants
 6
screaming warring; and
 7
end roses
 8
 
 
i hear myself, combative-candi[e]d
 9
no escape to hours
 10
pretending to be; not;
 11
blind-deaf-mute; you
 12
 
 
human, you name you are,
 13
this is me, i permeate you
 14
whence
 15
reciprocity is dispute — a universe connives
 16
you-me-i-you
 17
 
 
this is the case,
 18
you,
 19
birth's i view
 20

#nofalseundertone #justtwocrazies #redundant #plagiarizedhismind #reciprocity #underground #<3U2fract
#fcInHiding #saveyourself

3/22/16
thanks for the incessant lovin', baby. sorry to have this under unknown. :*


22 Mar 15

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poem anniv.
 — unknown

not the same space as when it first showed up. hardly anyone could read this then, but at least they bothered. now, they just look for hallmark.
 — cadmium

oh, thank you.

and, who might you be?
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 — fractalcore

your gf, of course
 — unknown

yo mamma.
 — cadmium

I'm lovin it!
 — aforbing

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