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CHUG CHUG CHUG
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wakes me a CHUG CHUG CHUG
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you pass by and doubles
 2
CHUGUG CHUGUG CHUGUG
 3
it's supposed to be dead on the moon
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my most heartsick invention,
 5
where is the next railway stop ?
 6

5 Apr 15

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rural and working. don't change a hair on it.
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Cheers for the read,
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"What would you think if I sang out of tune..."
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