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may i love you

i leave you. it's what she said
if only you hypothesize
you're i breathe
is voluntary
'coz there are irregular rhythms
and it must be you
my oxygen supplier
days i inhale the guitar
same smell
different lies
i stage this affect
to a once prelude
now blocking the airway
to what this piece is about
to conclude
it's about you, and
will you point me
if there is another you, where?
this is what i'm going to say

30 Apr 15

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