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may i love you
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i leave you. it's what she said
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if only you hypothesize
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you're i breathe
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is voluntary
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'coz there are irregular rhythms
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and it must be you
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my oxygen supplier
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days i inhale the guitar
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same smell
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different lies
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i stage this affect
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to a once prelude
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now blocking the airway
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to what this piece is about
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to conclude
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it's about you, and
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will you point me
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if there is another you, where?
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still,
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this is what i'm going to say
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30 Apr 15

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