poetry critical

online poetry workshop



the sweetest spot
fractalcore

lone coordinates
 1
defy all duplication
 2
and/or forgery.
 3




here's my excuse:
i'm pretty rusty from not being in-touch
with my inner voice or from being
dishonest at the tip of the pen.

but, please, critique me as harshly as you
can to bring me back to life.

:p

6 May 15

Rated 10 (10) by 1 users.
Active (1):
Inactive (0): 10

(define the words in this poem)
(205 more poems by this author)



Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha

Comments:

*i'd like to be harsh as needed.
your poetry is either on its zenith state or your conciousnes is. you don't want this to go stale, do you?
 — unknown

Recent Best (expand)
    0.298s