losers' faces be like
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kind of virtual relationship
31 May 15
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i really liked a lot of this, good style and a great idea I hope you can develop further. i wonder about the title though.
this made my bowels move.
like a brown note.
'auto-corrects like cheat' is pretty good. your kind of virtual relationship
i i-loquence is pretty strong too
losers' faces be like -- is a cool grammar move.
yeah, probably a better title, one that matches the content. it's not as tactile -- though i like the thought seeing your first title, 'stooping down to poetry', as stooping down into writing to get writing as what it actually is.
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