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morning chronicle
xyzab

i was always on the look-out for you, guys
 1
i'm at the tip of her, this time
 2
we overcrowded in millions
 3
i was so fast, my breathing would match hers
 4
my eyes were his, this chink
 5
a chronicle i could write and write
 6
i think i'm poets' overload
 7
sexual drives covered me ink
 8
positive rides
 9
umpteen stars
 10
i will bulge her
 11

4 Jun 15

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Slow down my friend, you are moving way too fast. Interesting imagery here, particularly L8.

Larry No Tattoos Lark
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