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Road to Ashington
useine

Down cobbled lanes
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the wind cries with repetition
 2
the willows yonder shed their dreams
 3
 
 
We are as broken vassels
 4
set on recoil
 5
the pascal lambs baying
 6
the skies tempest
 7
dark buildings stretch.
 8
Raised by startled faces.
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17 Jun 15

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Nothing to say except it's beautiful, shows the picture and the day.
 — Isabelle5

Thanks you Isabelle
 — useine

good poem
 — rivergood

the willows yonder shed their folliage
 — rivergood

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