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sensed
kripto

I smell a shadow on the ground
 1
creeping, creeping closer
 2
towards the carnival
 3
 
 
The frown is all that can be seen
 4
from a distance
 5
fog takes over
 6
as the show begins
 7
 
 
Howling voices
 8
screeching children
 9
beginning with quiet moans
 10
However not so quiet
 11
 
 
Shrieks over ecstasy
 12
coming from
 13
where?
 14
source unknown
 15
 
 
The happy couple
 16
are now, a couple
 17
no longer happy
 18
no longer a couple
 19
 
 
what happened
 20
Time?
 21
Is it even real
 22
Or?
 23
 
 
Oh, It had flew
 24
The realization
 25
the breaking point
 26
The sex
 27
 
 
What sex?
 28
No sex
 29
alcohol
 30
violence
 31
 
 
abuse
 32
Hatred
 33
clarity
 34
mixed
 35
 
 
silent thought of time and patience,
 36
decisions
 37
separation
 38
A legal declaration
 39
 
 
But now
 40
Forced in
 41
and out and in
 42
held to the bed
 43
eyes shut
 44
 
 
Baby
 45
Death
 46
Death
 47
Death
 48

21 Jun 15

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Interesting fate reversed
 — lucion

nice. sensed.
 — unknown

What happened?
Betrayal, that.

That wasn't easy.
Though forgiven.
 — unknown

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