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it will be a day without selfies
unknown

and on that day what will it be
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will I be yellow and swollen
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like a discarded fruit
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or holding my breath in a self made dam
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my membranes broken
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will I be struck mute
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left barking at the clocks and walls
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or prey for a crooked sidewalk
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will I be surrounded by visitors,
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those who claim to know a layer of me
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or those who have come to just claim
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or will I be present but absent
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slumped in a chair
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dressed in drool and a confetti
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of oat meal and grits
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26 Jul 15

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stewed prunes?
 — unknown

I really like this poem! It's very relevant to someone in my life right now so it hits home in many ways.

If I may share my thoughts:

Yellow/swollen/discarded fruit: yellow/shrunken discarded fruit..swollen or shrunken, both can work just wanted to throw that alternate image out there.

Self-made
mute/stuck/barking: holed/barking at clocks
or will I pray for a crooked sidewalk?

or those who come to just claim?
Will I be found slumped in a chair....

Thanks! I hope you don't mind some feedback. I'm going to read this poem to my friend tonight, it's awesome.
 — jenakajoffer

Funi tittle
 — unknown

I am the last stanza.

Larry far away from the present Lark
 — larrylark

lol larr
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gr8
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thanks
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spam
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I'm coming to visit today, but I won't be claiming anything.
 — jenakajoffer

lol
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selphish
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spaam
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the anti selfie
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Fug omg
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