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you and me, red
jenakajoffer

O' Hatter, do you like the drink of my tits?
 1
tune-in-Tokyo!
 2
will you inject my suitcase with sperm,
 3
shove your head under God's bloody faucet?
 4
 
 
you've dealt red cards before
 5
but I’m the Queen of embryonic hearts;
 6
unleash the hummingbirds, the nectar
 7
fill me with hot water tea-time talker!
 8
 
 
if I don't come wearing a fetus
 9
blame the orchard between us in bed,
 10
the pomegranate
 11
my rotting womb.
 12

8 Aug 15

Rated 8 (8.7) by 2 users.
Active (2): 9
Inactive (3): 5, 7, 10, 10

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do you do tents and sleeping bags as well?

i can set you up with a sleeping bag?
 — unknown

trump approves rouge boob
 — unknown

strophes 2 and 3 are spot-on.  strophe 1, not so much.
 — JKWeb

I like sleeping bags.
 — jenakajoffer

Thanks for your comment James!
 — jenakajoffer

Wow, either I have a really poor memory (which is likely) or this feels like it has definitely been changed for the worse,

Are you playing, Jen?
 — PollyReg

tea-time talker?

Whaaaaa?
 — PollyReg

Yeessss.
It feels Like the attitude of naked aggression with cognitive ability of Gertrude Stien.
Love it
 — crepaway

Hi Polly! Yes I'm playing.

Thanks for the comments :)
 — jenakajoffer

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