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a buried sigh, breaking ground
mandolyn

it went away   the big picture
 1
what he said  without flinching    or maybe
 2
he did stand back   viewing my thralldom
 3
 
 
waiting for my clock to crash      
 4
its taste for impact   and anxious ground    
 5
 
 
not knowing the sun is vital    
 6
always over me     a fiery professor    
 7
telling me    he is only fresh panic      
 8
hell-bent on ceasing
 9
 
 
pointing to my hair    in its prison    
 10
such ends   split from boundaries  
 11
that phantoms would find me   easily
 12
 
 
a map of every moment    how i could be free
 13
and that wish for nostalgia    
 14
how i live with his closure   his nothing more
 15

13 Aug 15

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