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i am the lucky one

where are you from?
i come from the land of the free,
the place they all want to be
where are you going?
i plan to have it all,
to know myself and inspire everyone else
i want to make a difference,
i want to matter
and have a place in this world
what are you doing in life?
right now, i am in love
and in school
making it through each day,
but always waiting for the next to mean something
i can have it all,
i have the freedom to be everything
who are you?
i am the lucky one

18 Jun 04

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NICE. Simple but nicely written. I LOVE the line 17 and 18
 — dajkercy

thank you.
 — yrrockstar

I like your work.
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