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i am the lucky one
yrrockstar

where are you from?
 1
i come from the land of the free,
 2
the place they all want to be
 3
 
 
where are you going?
 4
i plan to have it all,
 5
to know myself and inspire everyone else
 6
i want to make a difference,
 7
i want to matter
 8
and have a place in this world
 9
 
 
what are you doing in life?
 10
right now, i am in love
 11
and in school
 12
making it through each day,
 13
but always waiting for the next to mean something
 14
i can have it all,
 15
i have the freedom to be everything
 16
 
 
who are you?
 17
i am the lucky one
 18

18 Jun 04

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NICE. Simple but nicely written. I LOVE the line 17 and 18
 — dajkercy

thank you.
 — yrrockstar

I like your work.
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