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christmas sucks so i wrote a poem about it...incomplete
mr_e

Gold and frankenseins and myrr
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are not child friendly christmas gifts.
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Three wise men, more like three wise guys.
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No xbox or ex box, since it was still hundreds of years before paper was invented, and nearly 1900 years for the invention of electricity.
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christmas day sucks too, if you are jesus
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because your birthday and santa claus come on the same day.. so you basically lose out on a third of your presents.
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just started this.. will jazz it up later....like paper probably was invented around then.. i don't know.. will have to put some thought into this.

10 Dec 15

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Don't think on this one, just goof -- open your inner second grader and sing.
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