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christmas sucks so i wrote a poem about it...incomplete

Gold and frankenseins and myrr
are not child friendly christmas gifts.
Three wise men, more like three wise guys.
No xbox or ex box, since it was still hundreds of years before paper was invented, and nearly 1900 years for the invention of electricity.
christmas day sucks too, if you are jesus
because your birthday and santa claus come on the same day.. so you basically lose out on a third of your presents.

just started this.. will jazz it up later....like paper probably was invented around then.. i don't know.. will have to put some thought into this.

10 Dec 15

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