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dear me 2015

santa baby,
gift me
a myth
cold love
hanging misery
on a tree
er, the muse
a mystery
er, mitt
coded xmas
oh, dear me
writes bad poetry

25 Dec 15

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something in there is working hard to align with something not quite seeable... like, maybe jupiter or santa...? but, it's a fun ride watching for it to happen.

the 'mitt' is cool... like, if you'd said 'mit' it wouldn't have worked as directly. but, gift me a 'gift me a myth cold love' is cold cool.
 — cadmium