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dear me 2015
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santa baby,
 1
gift me
 2
 
 
a myth
 3
cold love
 4
 
 
hanging misery
 5
on a tree
 6
 
 
er, the muse
 7
a mystery
 8
 
 
er, mitt
 9
coded xmas
 10
 
 
oh, dear me
 11
writes bad poetry
 12

25 Dec 15

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something in there is working hard to align with something not quite seeable... like, maybe jupiter or santa...? but, it's a fun ride watching for it to happen.

the 'mitt' is cool... like, if you'd said 'mit' it wouldn't have worked as directly. but, gift me a 'gift me a myth cold love' is cold cool.
 — cadmium

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