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genesis rewritten
ellebelle

god is not an old man in a white cloak
 1
god is young
 2
god is
 3
sharp angles and a tattoo that says
 4
HELL IS REAL
 5
he is a starving artist
 6
on the streets
 7
torn jeans
 8
people don’t pay for mistakes
 9
 
 
god is
 10
drunk in a club
 11
on a tuesday night
 12
bloody knuckles in an alley
 13
dangerous eyebrow raises
 14
 
 
god is
 15
cardboard signs that say
 16
“need money for weed”
 17
and ecstasy induced heaven
 18
 
 
god said
 19
let there be clouds
 20
and he blew a puff of smoke
 21
from a cigarette
 22
 
 
god is
 23
damaged and despairing
 24
one of us because we weren’t like him
 25

2 Jan 16


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