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Sea
HisPoem

I still live beside the sea
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still close enough to hear her call,
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close my eyes, remember when
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I thought the world a different place
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the waters for as far as mind could see
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still I feel her like the wind
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her fingers running through my hair
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feel her touch my skin
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hear the snap of my sleeves
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like sails in the storm
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I can still hear her crying
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trying to push the shore into the sea
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catch me up like a kite without a string
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blow me back across the years
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covering up my footprints as if the days were sand
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whispering the sea will once again prevail
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over the craggy cliffs and ragged mountains
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and in those moments
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when all is wind and sea and pounding surf
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feet to leave their footing,
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panic pounding wildly
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to share with the living
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the wild winds just beyond our hearing
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before I remember once again
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whose is the voice and whose the words
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in these waters where the blessed are unclear,
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he who hears to listen or he who only hears the wind
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30 Jan 16

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I've never done that before, rate the pome 10 and then stare at the comment box for so long, only to post nothing.

I was speechless is all.  I still can't push the words past the lump.

Just so...touching
me.

thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Nice! l12 is great (my lucky number)

Its always tough to broach, but S4 could maybe be broken differently, imho.
 — sixtywatt

nice spot sixty, I wouldn't say S4 needs to break differently
but it could possibly be polished a bit...just a wee smidgen. :)
 — jenakajoffer

Thank you Jen, So glad you liked it!
 — unknown

Thanks sixtywatt, I'll take a look and see if I can make some improvements
 — unknown

Nice that you owned your poem. I really wanted to address the author personally, how close I feel to this. I spent my childhood by the sea so this really resonated with me, and my romantic dreamy side. You seem to love the sea as well, thank you for this poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Thank you Jen, Appreciate your kind remarks. You're right. I've always loved the sea. It's beautiful and terrifying, something we can understand in our own limited way but really quite beyond us at the same time.
 — HisPoem

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