light spills over
no water where i am,
but content meant
'lost and found':
light sails on
i still really suck at this, but what the hell...
thank you, universe!
31 Jan 16
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your titles are always in italics. that's a good idea and humble in a way. thus any regular readers always know they are yours and don't have to read if they don't want to?
i have no clue why you do it...just guessing.
vessel is quite abstract and i don't get anything in the way of concrete image here.
it's like an air poem with no anchor.
water and light as a metaphor with no context if that makes sense?
i won't rate this one
lost and found is ironic.
lol. let's stick with lost...for this one
Hey fract, nice to see you :)
Nice little poem, I enjoyed the sail. Very iridescent.
10 always fracking
Welcome back frac =)
Where's your "white" swan??
The title of this is quite intriguing...I must ponder & wonder longer. bbl
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