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Dragonflies
bill

Even on the farm
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Where i knew little of such things
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The immodesty of dragonflies embarrassed me
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15 Mar 16

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i love this.

embarrassed is better than dead, yeah?

immodesty is kick-ass. such that we should all be a dragonfly. :-)
 — PollyReg

Its only 'umans that decided that sex should be clothed

Larry pyjama man Lark
 — larrylark

how charming is this!!

i love it.
 — jenakajoffer

there once was a user on pc named 'bill' from many years ago...i wonder if this is the same person.

how very tantalizing this is...
 — jenakajoffer

Pretentious
 — unknown

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