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unknown

was i afraid the first time
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as you allowed me to swallow your brain whole
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even before sucking its neural juices
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were i becoming a whore long before stripping
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you wouldn't have known how low i would go
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woke your deepest recesses
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as i let you in with blood
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oriel reached by no one
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for you to genuflect serially
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prurient had it all-encompassing
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hardened fetal cells
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my divine to yours embedded
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thanks for the inspiration (10+ fave).
us, occupying a small space in the universe just to be ruined.
please don't allow vexations regarding us too narrow for the other.
















10 Apr 16

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