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was i afraid the first time
as you allowed me to swallow your brain whole
even before sucking its neural juices
were i becoming a whore long before stripping
you wouldn't have known how low i would go
woke your deepest recesses
as i let you in with blood
oriel reached by no one
for you to genuflect serially
prurient had it all-encompassing
hardened fetal cells
my divine to yours embedded

thanks for the inspiration (10+ fave).
us, occupying a small space in the universe just to be ruined.
please don't allow vexations regarding us too narrow for the other.

10 Apr 16

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