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unfinished story

named intense devotion
a story to be told to end began
years of bones salting away
waiting to go underground
once when the universe made us love
a hundred years after
hypothesized tropical skins
Pacific eyes for the chink
crowned twentyfull minutes
inside a shirt, under armpits
souls obssessing
we've travelled to be tucked away

15 Apr 16

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