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unfinished story
xyzab

named intense devotion
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a story to be told to end began
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years of bones salting away
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waiting to go underground
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once when the universe made us love
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a hundred years after
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hypothesized tropical skins
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Pacific eyes for the chink
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crowned twentyfull minutes
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inside a shirt, under armpits
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souls obssessing
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we've travelled to be tucked away
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15 Apr 16

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