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Desolation walks with me,
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it is the maggot that
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slinks about in the third ventricle
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and the fourth.
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it bores into the grey.
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Its palps shovel in
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love
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and goodness
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and hope...
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hope
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it finds
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particularly palatable.
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It chews its way into my
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auditory meatus and
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taps on my tympanum, "-.. .. ."
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in the
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cavernous space
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it echoes again,
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"-.. .. ."
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and again.
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and again...
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until the thrumming
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sound is
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all I can hear.
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12 May 16

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I really like some of your turns of phrase and language here! Your subject is quite blaring, a little like a constant screeching. Maybe if the fire alarm's going of 24 hours a day you should call maintenance. Cheers.
 — Known

I can really connect with the sentiments you express...Very well put

Larry wired Lark
 — larrylark

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 — Gabrielly

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