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if you write

a guitar shape of me
silly lyrical
hoping significance
how you profess sufi
if i only am not
a dying star
half the poem
half the smile
whole black

i'm not sure if i wrote this about you or it's about me. either way, it still resonates sensitiveness of the whole shebang with or without.
*& only now i realized why 'half' was used. was even too naïve about what 1st line on footnote actually tried to convey.

hugs & love always..

for fb-fc

21 May 16

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