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if you write
unknown

a guitar shape of me
 1
silly lyrical
 2
hoping significance
 3
how you profess sufi
 4
if i only am not
 5
a dying star
 6
half the poem
 7
half the smile
 8
whole black
 9

i'm not sure if i wrote this about you or it's about me. either way, it still resonates sensitiveness of the whole shebang with or without.
*& only now i realized why 'half' was used. was even too naïve about what 1st line on footnote actually tried to convey.

hugs & love always..

for fb-fc

21 May 16

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    design & code copyright donald tetto. all poems copyright their original authors.
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