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Sugar Cubes and Cough Syrup
jenakajoffer

He's asthmatic, allergic to dogs
 1
smokes a pack a day and sips Robitussen
 2
through a straw.
 3
 
 
He ticks like a grandfather clock
 4
but he can't count hands; always late, misses the date
 5
makes me sit by the watering hole
 6
as I wait for my morning let down.
 7
 
 
He pops a cocktail of benzos
 8
plops a sugar cube in his mouth; rolls it around
 9
before bearing down and shattering it
 10
between his teeth.
 11
 
 
I fell in love with it--
 12
his sweet saliva and slurred Scottish
 13
his addiction to adrenaline
 14
and the way he danced in the starlight
 15
with my legs slung around his waist.
 16
 
 
He doesn't know what elixir means
 17
not mete or metaphor,
 18
yet he quotes fat bastard doin a jobby
 19
says he never ate any corn--
 20
I remind him that he chewed my ear off
 21
the night before but he says it was just a niblet;
 22
the sweet crunch of pain exploding through the silk
 23
where I wet-nursed his tremors.
 24
 
 
I'd like to give him a taste of his own
 25
medicine; just a teaspoon of tongue
 26
to help the venom go down.
 27

4 Jun 16

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L11 - shattering "IT."  Don't be leavin' dem pronouns out da mix!  ;-)  Otherwise, BANGIN'!  I life how L's 1-12 and then L's 13-29 are two different poems.  Each of these two word groupings work completely OFF one another and without one, u can't have the other.  I marvel at your word craftiness!  And ROBITUSSEN...(Here comes the barfing sound...BLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORK!)  <3
 — starr

Hmm,
should be straight-facing Jack
like good hard-working writers.

It wont kill you this decade
 — unknown

Beautiful painting.  So hard to want to talk to the people who influenced us, knowing it will never be acknowledged.  Had to google alphorn, and pronounced it alf-orn. Haha.
 — Infrangible

Thanks Starr! Sorry it's been awhile buddy. Love you mang xxx!

Hey infrag, wow it's been ages since I've seen you around, thanks so much for the read. Cheers :)
 — jenakajoffer

VERY nice work!
 — aforbing

Thanks Furbie!! 😉
 — jenakajoffer

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