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when periwinkle reminds me of you,
mrkhoo

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                      i
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                   smile
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              intense desire,
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   greenhorn chaste conceived,
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     virgin flame, glowing red
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      satisfaction guaranteed.
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“sweet intercourse of indulgence”
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26 Jun 04

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interesting.
 — pennylane

this i think, is a more fitting title. lovely.
 — wendz

white heat and sweet

grace
 — borntodance

pretty.
 — Meep

Of course we all know that size doesn't count. I'd prove it to you but I've lost my microscope.

Larry Tiny Todger Lark
 — larrylark

i really like how this was written.
 — dismantleme

yeah, it makes a pretty picture and everythinggggg
 — unknown

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