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Flirt
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Certain well bred
 1
   women experience
 2
   men with bemusement
 3
 
 
I have chosen to
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   see this as flirtation
 5
   not judgment
 6
 
 
Must I represent
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   my fellow men
 8
   with honor and grace?
 9
 
 
No- that would be a
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   lie- of course- other
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   men mean nothing
 12
 
 
Standard operating
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   procedures are not
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   relevant
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This world shrinks to
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   two- bound by brainless
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   electricity
 18
 
 
It is by design-
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   a hummingbird's
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   aerial display
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Or a peacock's plume
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   this primal whimsy
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   our splendid dance
 24

26 Jul 16

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I question your use of Capital letters on the First of Each Line
See ... ^^^ Doesn't it look Forced?  
Fight your Microsoft Word formatting and choose your capitalization based on which words you want to POP, not just becuz your Word begins a Line.
Overall a great poem!
 — aforbing

capping the first line is a classic poetry format that's been used for centuries. it's a decoration, but so is writing a poem itself.
 — cadmium

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