I question your use of Capital letters on the First of Each Line
See ... ^^^ Doesn't it look Forced?
Fight your Microsoft Word formatting and choose your capitalization based on which words you want to POP, not just becuz your Word begins a Line.
Overall a great poem! — aforbing
capping the first line is a classic poetry format that's been used for centuries. it's a decoration, but so is writing a poem itself. — cadmium