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you met me at my most mediocre poetry stance
unknown

i read you in the middle of verses
 1
of feeling the highs and lows of a hammock
 2
a pendulum of puns and romances
 3
meter, lyric, cadence hideous; lover-
 4
poet
 5
i have swung nigh
 6
eyes set
 7
mountains high with an apple in your mouth
 8
your fascination climbs higher each time
 9
i throw back tomato lines
 10
plant a secret garden that never stops flowering
 11
a floral bed you want me burried
 12
your best bloom of ode
 13
found summit from the lesson of never picking a flower you love
 14
 
 
the most
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31 Jul 16

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I can taste this in the back of my throat.

I feel like you could be someone I know and this is about me. It's fucking amazing. I love this. Thank you.
 — dvdsxr

thank you! the amazing comment was more like it.
 — chloris

excellent poem
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