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fractalcore

supple-mental
 1
pre-curse-sorry:
 2
diff fission, see?
 3
 
 
portalled two-dei,
 4
hue burst into being,
 5
human for (s)miles end tears –
 6
thir(s)ty fur years!
 7
 
 
found hue... hound, you!
 8
 
 
dark settled chalk-lit:
 9
flu o'er the cocoa's nest –
 10
yoga zest!
 11
 
 
Om-gripped, climbed deep,
 12
ash-zen-did long 'bee for
 13
thee:
 14
short no-tease?
 15
 
 
G(ee) = big cheese!
 16
 
 
stacca-two-wee rat race,
 17
in-ner(d) peeks,
 18
bike riding waves
 19
of the hand that speaks
 20
 
 
Klingon... hang on...
 21
 
 
wear Vulcans like Doc Martens:
 22
eternal mountain ears a'pointea green,
 23
a'plantree running grin –
 24
uneven feet, 4'12" exactly!
 25
 
 
we're living dents leaving
 26
denture marks on the trail –
 27
two evolv is nut(s) for the frail!
 28
 
 
one on one we chance
 29
upon a once-in-a-lifetime dance –
 30
i drown and c®ave for more
 31
 
 
infinite PLUS,
 32
immortal iterations at my
 33
fractured core:
 34
 
 
 
 
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII                LOVE                       YOUYOUYOUYOUYOU
 35
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII            LOVELO                     YOUYOUYOUYOUYOU
 36
IIIIIII              IIIIIII         VELOVELO                                      YOUY
 37
IIIIIII               IIIIIII      VELO    VELO                                 OUYO
 38
IIIIIII              IIIIIII     VELO        VELO                             UYOU
 39
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII     VELO            VELO                        YOUY
 40
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII      VELOVELOVELOVELO                   OUYO
 41
IIIIIII                       VELOVELOVELOVELOVE              UYOU
 42
IIIIIII                      LOVE                     LOVE          YOUY
 43
IIIIIII                    LOVE                         LOVE      OUYOUYOUYOUYOU
 44
IIIIIII                   LOVE                            LOVE   YOUYOUYOUYOUYOU
 45




birthday happy burp,
my baby kyutee tat'!

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fractalcore
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12 Oct 16

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Comments:

I pretty much like lines 1 thru 45.
 — JKWeb

thank you, JKWebster sir.
;)
 — fractalcore

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