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Tribus #1
lonely

I have named my short poems "tribus" so that I do not get slagged off for not conforming with the niceties of haiku/senryƫ.

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a Christmas gift -
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chocolates of unknown brand
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and provenance
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6 Dec 16

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Perhaps a different word for "a"?

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