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Cro Magnon
Rossant

I want to see more freckles
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proud ginger hair
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Okay a protruding chin
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face short and wide,
 4
but girl you've got something
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an early lineage
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with beads and cave paintings
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ancestral worship
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and a bigger brain.
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The possibilities
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are boundless.
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Your model reflecting through glass
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a thought in a museum
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a muses shawl of time
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18 Dec 16

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Very nice...
 — aforbing

whoever wrote this must have inherited a lot of cranial meat. kudos!
 — unknown

that was me ^
 — chloris

I prefer  Neatherdal ancestor worship
 — unknown

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