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percocet

Your Mother is a Whore.
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3 Jun 17

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but you shouldn't have tried to write about it
 — unknown

U have something real to say about what I did?
 — percocet

yes.
the repeat of "coffee" in 3, 5, and 13 is awkward
as is the repeat of "attic" in 7 & 8
maybe your goal was to post a journal entry on a poetry website
if so, mission accomplished
 — unknown

herp er der!
 — unknown

repetition is awkward to irrelevant.?
 — percocet

what do you want?
 — percocet

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