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reality i create
unknown

drawn from the elysian fields to the ocean's pacific
 1
afar i'm on a skinny dip ride
 2
sun-kissed as i lay my bicycle
 3
overlooking a seashore of ground mud
 4
blade of grasses blow tumbleweeds
 5
sequoias grow coconuts
 6
squirrels run to their sandy crab holes
 7
 
 
today is another low tide of hardened soil for gathering seaweeds of dried leaves
 8
to have a taste of raw fish of bees noise
 9
in a polarity of seabirds of a lone dragonfly,
 10
and quiet butterfly hops
 11
 
 
i would go further to dive at the bottom fields sea floor
 12
reach for dandelion or violet corals
 13
snorkel in sunglasses
 14
cleats of aqua shoes in place
 15
careful that i won't get pricked by sea urchin rose thorns
 16
not misidentify a phytoplankton from gooey matters
 17
 
 
i come out of the water fresh dry from the fields
 18
don't care to a mess and salty smelling hair
 19
in time for a train ride to seal my ocean of thoughts
 20
seeing the same skies however birds fly high
 21
underwater universe turns upside down
 22

16 Jul 17


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