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coordination
cadmium

coordination of
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the reception
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of sensations
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i feel you, smell, tell, and say.
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                 >> water from heaven is rain --
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                    the wind from yesterday
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dry toast
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pot roast
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casper -- ghost.
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these ele-ghost things
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grossing my mind, all
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come
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their way
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to stay, to say good night, little mike;
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                                  white my fright.
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25 Jul 17

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changes made: expanded and contracted some phrases to actually make a more concrete poem.
 — cadmium

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